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(For the tearful US vet viewed on PBS
and all his fellow wounded)


I came up over the rise
said the vet, to find myself face
to face with death,
a German soldier
pointing his rifle straight
at my chest; I had no chance
to raise mine

we stood there awhile, youth
to youth, desire to
desire, tandemly clothed in
drab weeds of war, intent
on a mission planned out by
strangers, safe
and sound in a room
full of maps far, far away from
this once verdant
meadow, this river
of blood

I saw in his eyes not man,
not monster, but an unwelcome
glimpse of forever; he saw
in mine a quivering
flame, unready, unwilling
to be snuffed to that
darkness ahead of my time

in that frozen moment, he
summoned a courage far
beyond killing for
country or cause 

his eyes
slowly softened, freeing
the breath I’d held as
my last, and, shaking his
head, he dropped to
the ground the cold, hard
steel, leaning upon it
as if it were now a cane

said he in a soft, wistful voice,
"for you, the war is over"

I live every hour, each
undeserved minute, 
burdened with knowing 
for absolute certain I’d never
have been that brave
or that kind

--Jo VonBargen 2011

God bless our troops, from all wars, everywhere.
Especially those still suffering,
reliving the horror.


 


Comments

Oscar Sparrow
01/25/2012 6:24am

Very moving indeed. You get the dignity of the drama with the best words in the best places...."drab weeds of war" - what can I say? The cemeteries in your picture are more or less compulsory viewing for Euro kids. Let's hope..

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01/25/2012 8:40am

Great piece!

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01/25/2012 9:51am

Many thanks, Oscar and Tink!

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01/25/2012 11:58am

You know, you are my favorite poet

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01/25/2012 1:18pm

Awww, thanks, Jack, you sweet thang! Music to a poet's ears, my friend! I'm very honored.

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01/25/2012 5:47pm

You brought back a forty-five year old memory of a moment when I gazed down into a hole, in a triple canopy jungle, half-way around the world. I don't know that anyone else could have done that.
You are the master.

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01/25/2012 9:32pm

A hush came over me as I finished your poem. I''m still sitting in it grateful for your amazing talent and where it takes me. Many thanks.

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01/25/2012 11:36pm

Oh, that's so sweet, Christina! I'm so honored that someone like you would read and enjoy my work. It means the world to me!

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01/26/2012 2:39pm

Thank you, Bert. I am indeed honored by your words.

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01/26/2012 5:15pm

Beautiful. And poignant. Tears of gratitude are mixed with regret as they fall upon the graves of those who have made it possible to live lives with gratitude and regret.

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01/27/2012 2:09am

Indeed. Many thanks for that, Caleb!

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05/26/2012 2:25am

Another example of your prodigious talent Jo. For a moment I empathised with both of those young men - very poignant.

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05/27/2012 4:40am

Beautiful and an unexpected, amazingly strong ending! What a poet you are!

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09/10/2012 11:52pm

Anyone know where I can find more information?

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